Thursday, May 31, 2018

Stanza 98



Original Old Norse: Auden & Taylor: Bellows: Bray:
Auk nær apni
skaltu Óðinn koma
ef þú vilt þér mæla man
alt eru ósköp
nema einir viti
slíkan löst saman
"Come" Odhinn, after nightfall
If you wish for a meeting with me:
All would be lost if anyone saw us
And learned that we were lovers."
"Othin, again | at evening come,
If a woman thou wouldst win;
Evil it were | if others than we
Should know of such a sin."
96.
"Yet nearer evening come thou, Odin,
if thou wilt woo a maiden:
all were undone save two knew alone
such a secret deed of shame."
Chisholm: Hollander: Terry: Thorpe:
“Come back near evening Odin,
if you would speak with me.
It would be entirely unfitting
unless only the two of us know of this deed.”
"At eventide shalt, Othin, come
if thou wilt win me to wife:
unmeet it were if more than we two
know of this naughty thing"
"You must wait, Odin; when it grows dark,
come back if you want to woo me.
It would be unlucky if other eyes
witnessed my weakness."
“Yet nearer eve
must thou, Odin, come,
if thou wilt talk the maiden over;
all will be disastrous,
unless we alone
are privy to such misdeed.”




Bellow's Note: 96. Here begins the passage (stanzas 96-102) illustrating the falseness of woman by the story of Othin's unsuccessful love affair with Billing's daughter. Of this person we know nothing beyond what is here told, but the story needs little comment.

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